Talk:UNDERTALE (film)/Main Transcript/3/@comment-45660590-20200623154056

yeah.... I finished reading through and its still bad. From a purely plot focused perspective, it needs work.

You glossed over too much of the ruins, which is the tutorial. It tells the human how to act. Snowdin, with the dog fights seems to serve the same purpose here, which honestly isn't the best place for it. Fighting should be saved for the ruins. Its already sparce as it is, and you should dedicate snowdin to pretty much solely the skeleton brothers. Also, the fights with Snowdrake and Icecap are all about self esteem issues, how the player interacts with them can teach us quite the lesson about believing in yourself, which over all should be a theme of this movie along with redemption and personal choice. And honestly, there hasn't even been one reset yet. Thats like... the most important part of the game. There is important lore there, especially with flowey, possibly the most important character.